Week 4: Checkpoint - Paragraphs

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Thesis:  Employers are violating employees' privacy beyond what is necessary to protect the company.

My supporting paragraphs will include a number of elements.  I will use examples of employers going too far in their monitoring.  I will then provide an analysis of why the monitoring was too invasive.  Finally, where applicable, I will demonstrate how the privacy issue can be mitigated; probably by comparing to another company which accomplished the same goal without the privacy concerns. 

The examples and analysis will demonstrate that employers are violating employees' privacy.  I will then proceed to demonstrate that either the employer does not need this information or the situation can be mitigated to an acceptable level.



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